(Been playing with this form in poetry workshop. Here’s a few I wrote.)
Tug pushes a barge
Upstream toward Albany
Leaf colored river.
Fat clumsy fingers
pretending they can crochet.
What will come of it?
Big dog rests on couch
As happy as she can be
this fall afternoon .
Cold clear fall morning
Water glistens in swimming pool
Cares left in my wake.
October, 2018
poetry workshop
step in the right direction
you go, Harry-san!
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Nice one db. And thank you.
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I like the last one but would change pool to river. It evokes an image of serenity.
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