Morning After

Traveled to NYC.

Hooked a trout and landed it.

Walked from 34th to 44th

on Broadway.

Crowds and stress

Oy vey

Beautiful morning on the river.

Cathy said it was perfect,

Even with a slight shiver.

Maybe better to have hooked 4

and landed 3.

Go figure.

July 12, 2022

4 thoughts on “Morning After

  1. Wonderful sensibility in this piece. Love the juxtaposition between NYC and the river. Workshop style comment: I think the 2nd line (“Hooked a trout and landed it.”) is out of place. I feel it more after “Even with a slight shiver.”


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